Pieces Within Pieces.

He didn’t break

Her heart,

He broke the pieces.



9 Replies to “Pieces Within Pieces.”

  1. Clever. I had to read this twice to fully appreciate it’s meaning. Simple yet powerful. I鈥檝e followed and ill be sure to check out some of your other posts. I鈥檓 a fellow writer myself and would love to get your feedback on some of my posts if you have time. I鈥檓 working on a novel currently and I post short stories on my blog. If not, thanks anyway, have fun writing and keep it up 馃檪

    1. Thank you 馃檪 I try to add twists in my poetry here and there. It pleases me to know you’ve followed and want to delve deeper into my posts….i’ll be sure to do the same, after all, helping each other as writers is all that matters 馃檪

      1. Thanks for the support 馃檪 and wow 1300+ followers? Congrats 馃檪 I can appreciate good poetry but can’t write it for the life of me :’)

      2. I have done for a prophecy in the novel I’m writing and i was suprised by how well it turned out. However my passions always gonna be story writing, there’s nothing quite like making a character out of nothing

  2. oh wow dude, it’s like you’re on a roll. If this stuff is biographical at the moment then it is uber heartsore but either way it is some incredible wording.

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