I gave myself over to the sound
Of my own heartbeat;
And the natural state
Of my own base impulses.
For a moment, I put all the shields down
Surfed on the waves of a world
In which, at any given time
Anything can change.
I lay still, conscious of nothing
Not even myself,
Taking it all in,
And I have to say,
That in that moment,
It was, without a doubt,
The best feeling in the world.
– O.D. ©2018
Art by: Alena-48
I feel the spirit of Bukowski here for some reason. Perfect.
Lol thank you. Why do you say that? 🙂
You created an atmosphere….then came to a profound conclusion. That’s how your poem speaks to me.
a beautiful state to be in my friend ❤ lovely imagery ❤
Thank you Kim ❤