Then she stared at me blankly,
With those bloodshot eyes
Saying I love you,
I’m smiling,
Re-setting… Frozen,
Re-assessing;
Wait, did she mean me,
Or her hidden stash?
– Original-Dante ©2016
Photograph by: IvanAndreevich
Contemplations From A Black Star Citizen.
Then she stared at me blankly,
With those bloodshot eyes
Saying I love you,
I’m smiling,
Re-setting… Frozen,
Re-assessing;
Wait, did she mean me,
Or her hidden stash?
– Original-Dante ©2016
Photograph by: IvanAndreevich
Lovely💝
Thank you dear ❤
You are welcome!
Happy beautiful words. ♥
Thank you Ananya 🙂
Is she keeping a bunch of men??
Bloodshot eyes…marijuana…could smell it when she spoke
So is she saying she loves me or does she need marijuana to make her say so? Which means she really doesn’t
Conundrum 😛
OHHH! See I was thinking she might have been losing sleep over decisions…Many men can mean a conundrum too. 😉
Haha true…your interpretation is awesome too 😉
I maayy speak from experience 😉
Hmmmmmm interesting 🙂 🙂 🙂
Have you not read my pieces? There is a lot of non-fiction in there 😉
I browsed quickly, intending to read when I was free…but let me go read some of them right now
I’d love to hear some thoughts, so be sure to let me know 😉
The ones I liked so far are stated as having the “comments section closed” how may I comment?
Well that is the first I’ve heard that, sorry 😦 WP hates me, I swear! Let me see if I can change that. Or just email me 😉
Your writing is very fresh and engaging lol you have a new stalker in me hahaha 😀
My pleasure, really 😉 And you are just the kind of follower I am looking for… I’m kinda fond of stalking, tend to do it myself. In fact been thinking about writing about it- purely fictional though…unless WP counts. 😛
The theme you touch on of fighting with your inner self I can relate with as I write a lot about that…the erotic poems are a welcome deviation too…i don’t know if it’s your intention to make the reader “feel” things haha cuz I do…i testament to your skill….i’d like to collaborate with you one day if you dont mind 🙂
I am intrigued at the idea of collaborating yes 😉
As for the inner fight, it is truly a difficulty to be at odds with ones self. Sexuality is just one of those things.
Now, on to the good stuff. Yes, erotic is certainly what I am going for in many of these. I want the reader to be horny and turned on when they are done 100% 😉
Lol we are going to get along well Fallen…i can feel it hahaha
I have been drawn since the moment I read you the first time… I was just waiting for you to catch up 😉 lol!
I think I fixed the problem in case you wanted to try again…