Letting you pass my force field
Comes with its own baggage,
Learn to decipher between
My real and fake grins
Before you say you know me;
As knowing me and staying after
Are two battles
I wouldn’t blame you for forfeiting.
You would not tolerate the thought
Of feeling sorry for me ,
If you were aware
That at this very moment,
In a pocket dimension,
There’s a tug of war
On whats best for me;
As I let the thought
Of fighting for you
Drift in and out the threshold
– Original-Dante ©2016
Art by: Lemmy-X
16 Replies to “Awareness For My Pocket Dimension.”
Had to break it up for Twitter, huh? Nice one, Michael
Lol what happened on Twitter Michael? and thank you 🙂
Lol just got the Twitter thing hahaha weird I know….Yes, Twitter’s 140 character limit just wasn’t allowing me room to express 😀
Oh, sorry. Misunderstood your last. I knew what was up. Just making colorful (maybe not) commentary.
Have a good Sunday
Enjoy your Sunday too my friend.
Very well written!
Thank you! 🙂
Gotta say thats truesome
Thank you Edna
Damn..this was intense. That ending!
Lol thanks Jo! hope you’re good 🙂
I am! As I hope you are as well. I think I’m going to write a few poems soon. And if I do, I’ll be responding to your poems in my own. Should be fun – interesting nonetheless lol.
I’m good thanks…you’re gonna write poetry? ooooooh can’t wait 😀 ….how will you be responding to my poems? 😛 i’m finding this really interesting btw 🙂
lol I bet! I’ll show you how I plan on responding to your poems – I’ll respond to one now in fact 🙂
I’ll be waiting 🙂
wait no more. published